Sunday, September 2, 2007

A Lie For A Love Comments

Rating: ★3.5

All of it is a lie
As I thought I loved you,
Until all you did was make me cry.
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Melissa Joy Chesky
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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

The rhymes in here are rather simple and while I like repetition, it has to have some kind of musical flow to it. This poem is almost devoid of any rhythm. That really hurts it badly. I can't recommend it for that reason. GW62

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Melissa Joy Chesky

Melissa Joy Chesky

Edina, MN
Melissa Joy Chesky
Melissa Joy Chesky
Edina, MN
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