A Life Together Cut Short Poem by Ray Lucero

A Life Together Cut Short

Rating: 5.0


Alas...our life together was cut short,
Our hopes 'n dreams cruelly dashed!
I still long for you, and must report;
My fervor and pure love unabashed

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A Life Together Cut Short
Tuesday, September 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We never forget first love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 03 September 2019

I can SO relate! This quatrain is like words from my own heart, opening old memories of my fiance', who died prematurely (and cut short our life together, what might have been.) No other love since has come close to comparing. A great deal of feelings expressed in a few short words.

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Lodigiana Poetess 03 September 2019

Just beautiful in its simplicity Ray, a joy to read....10 Lodigiana

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