A Lil One Poem by AURORA BANNECKJ
A Lil One
My head keeps spinning in circles
My heart keeps pounding faster
I don't know how much more I can take
I'm sick n tired of all these disasters
My blood feels like Its boiling
My mind wont stop twriling
Gotball these voices whispering in my ear
Telling me the one thing I truely fear
How do I keep from going insane when I feel like I am the one to blame
If wasnt for me. Who else would of seen
While I was lost in fear and worried about her
My thougbt were fogy to were nothing was clear
The voice tell me it fine but what about next time
My head keps spinning
My heart keeps pounding I am lost with out any thoery
But my faith is still high even if the unknown is dreary.
I really do love this one! It leaves a lot to the imagination, and you can tell how frantic they truly are. One suggestion I have is to maybe put a little bit more detail, just enough to where it isn't too vague for the reader. You have potential: 3
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4/26/2024 4:48:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Life is hard and things seem to drive us to insanity but its what keeps us on the brink to make us know that we are alive and we have to face fears and drive out the things that scare us to become a stronger person. Its hard to express feelings to other and that could be a fear but it helps.