A Lofty Hill Poem by Doris Cornago

A Lofty Hill



Woke
Perched
On top of
A lofty hill
Imagination's
Shortcircuited
Search for holes
Working overtime
Watching a vision
Wind whipping all
Around, leaves fly
Whippoorwill sound
Wayward train tracks
Whirling in and out
Looping larger loops
Surreal circumvention
Untouching in circle
Yet touches my core
Like skin feels wet
Watching raindrops
Run down gutters
Flinging frogs
Frightfully
Fracking
Free

A Lofty Hill
Sunday, July 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,life and death,lifespan,surrealism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my dream within a dream. For me, it has this meaning: you are safe in your core, everything that happens is external to who you are. And this is my epiphany, that I need to use the power of my mind to dispel the weakness that invades my spirit when I allow fears of death and/or disease clutter my space. What's yours?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris 31 July 2018

Hi Kostas, How are you Kostas, my friend? In this space, we are not strangers but touching fingers through our poems, like a velvet ribbon that's there from birth, the end is attached to someone in a far place. May you soon discover that peace is not found in isolation but finding that person who is tied with you with a velvet ribbon, Only then can your heart rest.

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Kostas Lagos 30 July 2018

10 for the poem,10 for the note and 10 for listening Hank Williams!

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Doris Cornago 29 July 2018

American Indian legend takes the whippoorwill song as a death omen. Somehow, the call makes us lonely, and has become a symbol for melancholy. Hank Williams and other singers frequently use the emotion-evoking whippoorwill in their songs. We should not be affected by legends but feel songs as they sync with our own spirit, as poems do.

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