Saturday, May 6, 2006

A Lonely Cave Cowlasaurus. Comments

Rating: 3.5

My cowlasaurus just ain't givin' up the ole'milk-juice these days...
She's fatter n' usual. I milk and i milk er' till she's dry.This thirsty slump makes me cry.
My name's Kevin Caveman.From thirst i wish not to die.
I'll get into my catch mobile...You see that's my time machine you see.
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A CHERMERICAL HOOT...MICHAEL J....YOU'VE GOT AN ARSENOL IN YOUR POCKET OF PROSERIES...GREAT WRITE...IO'''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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***** ********* 06 May 2006

Blimely you do live an extraordinary life Michael, you poor wife, springs to mind! lol Thanks for coming out of your cave to share this journey with us. I found the repetition of 'see' rather irritating, but it's your poem and I enjoyed it anyway. 10 from Tai

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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