A Lonely Cloud Poem by Neela Nath Das

A Lonely Cloud

Rating: 4.8


Silence reigned in the valley.
The lone pass was filled with snow;
No trees but tufts I could see,
Frozen rivers could not flow.

Only a lonely cloud there,
followed me along the way.
Galloping as lively mare,
seemed wanted something to say!

At once a leaf fell on ground.
Its color was deep, deep red.
Casting look no tree I found,
Thought I might have gone off head!

Then, the second leaf fell and,
the third, fourth, fifth on and on;
Was I in sorceress' land,
where none was living person?

The leaves were flying, flying..
The wind also strongly blew.
They danced then whirling, whirling,
like a ring of leaves they flew.

Surprised I then took a look,
Ah! I watched an awesome sight!
The cloud was moving as rook,
and raining leaves with its flight.

A lovely friend I then gained!
Cloud threw leaves and I caught them.
Laughingly, I touched my friend.
Thus we played our throw-catch game.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 30 January 2014

A fairy tale indeed ending in a happy game such is dreams...why not...regards

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 November 2013

Deep red leaves Reminds us the past life To keep more goodness In the future life!

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Prasanna Kumari 09 October 2013

nice to experience the lonely cloud filling life and the poem...

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 August 2013

Ours loneliness thus did end, Cloud threw leaves and I caught them a bonding brilliantly penned!

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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

the cloud and I became a friend nice read

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