A Lonely Star (2) Poem by Wassila Nader

A Lonely Star (2)

Rating: 4.8


How are you my star?
Are you still alone?
Or you talked to the moon?
And why are u so sad? did he came?
Or still the same?

the star replied:

Yeah he came,
And said the same,
He also wanna die,
Cuz no one in the sky, cares or even try,
to be his friend,
All stars told him that he's the worst to be a friend,
And he'll live alone,
Then he'll be thrown......

But I told him NO! ! ! !
You are a good friend,
And I'm here to be your friend,
we'll fly together in the sky..

He told me NO! ! !
I came life alone,
I'll live alone, then I'll be thrown..........: (

So I'm still alone,
And I'll stay forever alone like him,
I wont fly, but i'll cry
Till I die
Cuz no one in the sky cares or even try to be my friend............

(This poem is dedicated to the lonely people in this world...)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shirley Hanley 06 December 2009

Wassila... a compassionate poem recognizing the pain of others... very nice.

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Abdullah Musa 03 December 2009

Good reasoning, good to see people showin concern about this world. I go with Kareem Hany, there is always hope for the lonely star.

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Wandering Scarlet 30 November 2009

poor moon........... sum 1 has to save him!

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Doha Ewiess 28 November 2009

why is it that much sad? ? ...actually i started to realize that no one is important for another...i mean that (me) is not important for anyone so i shall not wait for anyone to care about it...thats why i should be the one caring for myself...althuogh on the other hand, i still think we are not so lonely, there are always people around...but we shall not wait for their real love and care

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Kareem Hany 14 November 2009

nice and sweet poems (lonely star 1 & 2) .. but there's always hope for the lonely star that can be not lonely later :) .. maybe

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 January 2010

Loneliness is a greatest myth.

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Chitra - 22 January 2010

the pangs of loneliness are worst than death...well depicted in this emotional poem

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 22 January 2010

I thank you with all my heart for writing this one...thank you so much.

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Earam Dio 14 December 2009

Perfect dear friend please allow me to say wat Aashka Thakkar said that ur inner soul is good and carries alot of feelings

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Aashka Thakkar 14 December 2009

ur inner soul is good

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