Friday, May 18, 2018

A Look Back In Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was young and worry free,
My parent's took good care of me.
My life was good and full of joy,
Last thing on my mind was a boy!
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REGINA WILLIAMS
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Regina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 18 May 2018

Beautiful nostalgic story of a happy family and childhood bliss told in eloquent finesse. Rich flow of thoughts elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Thanks for sharing Regina and do remain blessed.

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Tango 18 May 2018

An excellent poem, about your family and child hood. you draw a lovely picture. It took me back to when? i was just a boy, and my family. Thank you. Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more from you. Tango.

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