A Look, Two Eyes Poem by Mike Tonkin

A Look, Two Eyes

Rating: 5.0


A look. Two eyes
Filled with yearning.
A look. Two eyes
Gently burning
Into mine.
Such warmth,
Such tenderness
Was in those eyes,
it was as if the trembling sky
Looked on me.
A look. Two eyes
Searching and discerning in mine
A gaze returning, the tenderness
And lit with such intensity
As to make her tremble like the sky.
A look. Two eyes.
Holding my world,
Causing me to unfold
From within myself
And pour out through my eyes
My love for her.

Tuesday, June 12, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 20 December 2012

similar to the previous poem in style, cleverly holding the reader.....

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Original Unknown Girl 21 June 2007

This is stunning, I love it, so intense, so romantic. The eyes have it.... as they say. Great work here. HG: -) xx

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Who's Erwhatsit 17 June 2007

Intense and beautifully honest words. DK

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