A Lost Confusion Poem by maddy macleod

A Lost Confusion



A lost mind.
I'm confused.
'Make up your mind! ' I tell myself.
I can't, everyone says something different.
They always have.
All I wish for is for that one special person to come along.
To find me.
Please find me!

A confused mind,
Never ask me questions,
You will never get the right answer.
My mind spins and I feel as though it will never stop.
Me, him, or him, or her?
What am I thinking! ? ! ? ! ? ! ?
A lost confused mind!






Save me...Please...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

love the ending very touching

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Omar Ali Sabar 31 August 2008

A very touching plea put into great context.. well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 August 2008

hey maddy, what a heart crunching piece u got here pal.a special one? how i wish if i could be the special one.........nice piece anyway.it touches me.

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