You showered love on him as-if
the sun embraces younger earth
with all her affection unhindered
never thinking for even a second
if he deserved that or not.
More than half of the days
he turned his back to you and
thrown your love in darkness,
you still like a understanding mother
ignored his misdeeds.
But your family of stars
wanted you to dropp this affair,
you tried to act to him as-if
you dont love him anymore and
you stopped loving all.
You behaved as if
you dont know what love is.
I was the one who knew the truth -
You are embodiment of love.
For all those days I was the moon,
a satellite the sun could never have had.
a very nice poem.the last two lines are so unexpected and the effect of the poem is good, i mean it surprises in the end.
Hi Putholi - This is poetry written from the heart - lovely,
Dear Putholi, You are on the basic topic of love.Some good imageries are working here to elaborate your message. The last two lines are nicely crafted. Liked it. Rated high. May I suggest why not become a word-thrift? Use them in a rationing manner. Go for some infinitive or gerund and let the reader have their own conclusion Rajkumar.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are embodiment of love. For all those days I was the moon, a satellite the sun could never have had..............wow! ! wonderful write eloquently flowing through ingenuity, quite interesting too,10+++, thanks for sharing