Sunday, July 3, 2016

A Love So Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

The deepest affections fall within the heart
The deepest of darkness of love to part
Yet it hurts like a shot at the centre of a dart
Transparent of lies through a cold heart
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PrisckEmily Gottfried
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Chinedu Dike 03 July 2016

An insightful depiction of love as mighty spiritual experience, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Beautiful love poem written from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Emily.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2016

Yet it hurts! ! Thanks for sharing.

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