Marilyn Lott

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A Lovely Picnic With Friends - Poem by Marilyn Lott

Oh what a lovely day it was
The weather warm and sweet
Packed with friends we cherish
No better folks could you meet

We barbequed dogs on the grill
Out in the bright sunshine
Enjoying the open sky to eat
A meal that was truly fine

Burgers too were grilled just right
Topped with onions and stuff
Just simple tasty scrumptious food
Without a lot of unnecessary fluff

Deviled eggs so perfectly made
With a sprinkle of paprika on top
A delicious blend of flavors
That really truly hit the spot

It was a day we will remember
Good food, good friends together
Can’t ask for a more relaxing time
With the gift of perfect fall weather!


Comments about A Lovely Picnic With Friends by Marilyn Lott

  • (6/23/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    I felt he happiness of this picnic and the food, friends and weather seemed perfect. No fuss, just relaxing and enjoying each other's company. Delightful poem of friendship and love. 10
    Karin Anderson
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (11/16/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    Fine poetic description.... I enjoyed it.....10+ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 20, 2011


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