A Messed Up Poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just Read It And U Will C.......... Read It Up And Down And Compare They R One Of The Same....... Poem by misty sa...
A Messed Up Poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just Read It And U Will C.......... Read It Up And Down And Compare They R One Of The Same.......
dead im now, happy im now says she
light a then around all darkness sees she
care you dont, see you cant says
everyone to up walks she
hands her down running blood
slice slice
wrists her to blade the puts she
around everyone to invisible is she
her hears one no
her sees one no
halls the walks she
the real poem:
she walks the halls
no one sees her
no one hears her
she is invisible to everyone around
she puts the blade to her wrists
slice slice
blood running down her hands
she walks up to everyone
says cant you see, dont you care
she sees darkness all around then a light
she says now im happy, now im dead!
very nice poem kinda reminds me of my friend tho... alot.. but i like it just the same
I loved both and dont even think you had the need to print the second any one who gets it would just read it from bottom to top, what it said to me was a way of showing a self harmers confusion and mixed emotions Loved it Kev
The real poem i can relate to, kinda, and a good write it is to, The 1st bit, is like yoda trying to do poetry, (lol) sorry, couldnt help myself. Agree with 'Black shadow' 1st is a bit strange,2nd is cool, Well done.
I hated the first poem, it really confused me, but the second is deep orginezed with a strong idea, keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 3:19:39 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Let's put the 'fun' back in funeral.