Tuesday, October 2, 2007

A Million Little Lies Comments

Rating: 3.8

Don’t believe the truth.
Tell me what I wanna hear.
Tell me a million little lies.
Come closer, whisper them in my ear.
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Samantha Ashley
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Poison 9901 02 October 2007

Very nice Samantha, and I'm not lieing, The repetive line 'Move closer, whisper them in my ear' make this piece flow very well. Some poets tend to get hung on one line poems such as these and they dont really make any sense, But you have constructed this one perfectly. Thank you so much for shareing it with us. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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