Alexandre Nodopaka

Freshman - 993 Points (1940 / Russia)

A Moment Of Aloness - Poem by Alexandre Nodopaka

Transformed into a moment
of loneliness
There was this single bud
waiting to open
under the first rays
of the sun
to show her center

Why did I think of it as she
I do not know
Maybe because it was closer
at that moment
than you could be

And when she opened
I entered her
wanting your scent
I felt very Zen
and no longer alone.

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Topic(s) of this poem: poem

Form: Prose Poem


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  • Callie Carroll (10/29/2009 10:25:00 PM)


    A lovely moment of pure longing. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/19/2008 1:20:00 PM)


    This was a nice piece of writing with a clarity that I like to see. It had a purpose
    and a meaning combined.

    GW62
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, January 8, 2016


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