A Moment's Triumph! Poem by sophia hayyat
A Moment's Triumph!
Sometimes for a moment feeling penetrate our souls,
Things are no longer as they used to be.
Time have changed...
Circumstances different.
For an unusual moment...
Sense of completion pervades creating a delicate bubble around.
Destiny achieved...
Mission accomplished but for a moment.
A long awaited moment vanishing with the notion:
Somethings are there, for they are not meant to be changed.
For eternal peace?
Harmony?
Stability?
Sacrifice is the soul answer...
Woe to metaphysical morals and morales.
Conquering at one time and sacrificing at another.
The metaphysical mumble jumbles.
The human weakness or humane emblem.
It worths it.
Is it there for sublime purpose?
Or mere an illusion?
Illusion too worthless to be revised
Or too destructive demanding revolution within the self
Trascending into broader sphere very next moment.
The meaphysical mumble jumbles.
Might not call for revolution but
It does certainly augement some at the cost of other.
Perishing into nothingness otherwise.
Weak covering the strong,
Effecting the 'circle' thus.
For goodness?
Illusion too worthless to be revised Or too destructive demanding revolution within the self Trascending into broader sphere very next moment.... Very excellent.....cheers with 10+++
those little moments is what finally makes life's journey worthwhile well said...deep layers of meaning in here
Sometimes for a moment feeling penetrate our souls, Things are no longer as they used to be what a fantstic start of rich poem.. your way of expression is really impressive and logical way of writing.. realistic approach in this poem is making it sweet one... lovely...10/10
Breathe, let go and remind yourself that this very moment is the only one you know and that you have it for sure. One should enjoy the wonderful moments for one they can be so special who never had anyting special in lifetime. A very inspirational poem conveying a message that if one believes so much in life, one would fling oneself less to the moments. So these tiny jolts should be enjoyed.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/20/2024 12:44:19 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Flowing lines, descriptive phrases-Well done!