A Morning In Paradise Poem by Lisa Rhodes

A Morning In Paradise

Rating: 4.0


In the scissor star cut
morning, the sleeping ocean
gently awakens from brilliant
appollion sun rays;
it boils into ripples-
then the sun dives into a bottomless
royal blue pool, running
in competition with the silver slippery fishes
pulled by a metallic thin light,
swimming in and out
like the luminous lining of sexy new dress.

Monday, February 16, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean,running,silver,star,sun,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

well written piece of poetry enjoyed your descriptive words

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Oluko George 17 February 2009

so sweet a poem....we all picturise the scene...big up!

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Indira Renganathan 17 February 2009

Well done...'royal blue pool, running....like the luminous lining of sexy new dress.'beautiful description..congrats10

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Lisa Rhodes

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Manhattan, New York City
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