Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 384,598 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Mother's Day Special - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Who can stop your from falling on the ground?
Are there any similarities with failures to be found?
You may find the favor and gain the corner
It is life and success has to come later or sooner

It is very difficult, to reach the top of the ladder
You got to do it without help from any leader
It is time consuming and sometimes very difficult
You succeed in your attempts at cost of pride and insult

Slowly and steady always go ahead and win the race
He has everything to exhibit with smiling face
The standing and position take him to different world
He must try to stand firm there and not develop cold

It is easy to sustain and remain at the bottom
You can forget the palaces and stay in small room
You may all the c comforts in living as ordinary man
You are at liberty to surge ahead as much as you can

It takes lot of energy in the form of sincere efforts
You try to maintain lead with good rapports
It is certainly bound to yield good result
People may find you as an honest and come to consult

Success sometimes may lead you to commit folly
It may not be your intention as is seen wholly
You may not be able to digest it as good person
The arrogance may take over from you without any reason

The person tends to become unreasonably blind and arrogant
He seems to think that the success has come of its own and instant
No one has done anything for him or not even by his contemprory
The transitional period has passed off and stayed there temporary

When such things take place in head
It takes person to fall back from lead
He fails to understand the mood and unable to read
He is bound to fail in all the respects without correct feed

He will try to find the faults with the events
This will compel him to pass unnecessary comments
It will generate lot of heat and dissension
It may prove his graveyard for the lack of passion

To sustain the grown and.live with it is great art
You only need good luck and very good start
Luck may favor reward you for sincere attempt
The initial reaction may not be slow but very prompt

Stay wherever you are and sustain
Curb the defeatist tendencies and contain
See to it that nothing goes against your interest
You may be able to judge and come out as best


Comments about A Mother's Day Special by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (7/8/2010 8:13:00 AM)


    Who can stop your from falling on the ground?
    Are there any similarities with failures to be found?
    You may find the favor and gain the corner
    It is life and success has to come later or sooner... motehr is always special for us....10
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (5/18/2010 5:51:00 AM)


    'To sustain the grown and.live with it is great art
    You only need good luck and very good start
    Luck may favor reward you for sincere attempt
    The initial reaction may not be slow but very promp..'
    Well said. Beautiful poem
    Enjoyed reading it
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  • (5/9/2010 9:46:00 AM)


    I wish to pray for all mothers of universe
    All religious books are full of praise with verses
    They all compare your service with that of noblest of noble....all salute togreat mothers....10
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 9, 2010


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