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Brown Eyes

Rating: 4.8

Brown eyes with sparkling light,
Standing before me just to right,
Inviting me near but not to fight,
May be closer views and clear sight,

I could see whole world in it,
Two eyes as if deem lamps lit,
Why sudden interest in me hit?
Muscled body with physique fit,

May not be that simple reason,
Spring all over as main season,
Flowers booming with colours different,
Invitation seemed only reason apparent,

I too was ready for open meet,
Shaking body with crumbling feet,
Not knowing what was in store?
Nothing was wrong for ground to explore,

Miss was not easy but hard nut to crack,
Little hurry was sign to pack,
Patience was must for not going back,
Attempt sincere but confidence not lack,

Both realized the gravity of situation,
It was real and not first sight or infatuation,
Time was critical and need of an hour,
Relation to grow and not sour,

Kind gesture with open invite,
Desires grew with ambition ignite,
It was not time to say good night,
Grab the opportunity as the time was right,

Soon developed intense love and bond,
Deep relations and each other fond,
Love was to succeed with ultimate marriage,
Simple arrangement and not as carriage,

All was done with ease and comfort,
Both the families had understand and rapport,
Extending good will and complete support,
Nothing was going bad as suggested report

When I look back and simply ponder?
No simple answer but only wonder,
No clouds to make loud thunder,
Simple acknowledgement with easy surrender

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Rafique Farooqi 23 August 2009

Very lucky girl who is wiih beautiful eyes

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2014

a beautiful poem about a pair of brown eyes

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Angelic Warrior 12 September 2009

brown eyes are beautiful...because they are welcoming.....warm....the color of chocolate.... nice write! .....lovely

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Mohammed Albalushi 08 September 2009

could see whole world in it, i like tis experssion, lucky girl with brown eyes

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When I look back and simply ponder? No simple answer but only wonder, No clouds to make loud thunder, Simple acknowledgement with easy surrender --> great the most eloquent languange: EYES LANGUAGE well done! I enjoyed it...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 August 2021

Beautiful deception of brown eyes! A fabulous poem! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 September 2020

Poem: 18067583 - Brown Eyes Member: Suresh Kumar Ek Comment: The love slowly develop into Simple acknowledgement With surrender because She was a hard nut to crack. Intricately interwoven love poem Admirations Sir Suresh

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Suresh Kumar Ek 25 September 2020

The love slowly develop into Simple acknowledgement With surrender because She was a hard nut to crack. Intricately interwoven love poem Admirations Sir Suresh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2020

Poem: 18067583 - Brown Eyes Member: Brown Eyes Comment: Brown underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants underpants

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Brown Eyes 25 August 2020

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