Friday, April 20, 2018

A Mystery Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every morning over a cup of hot coffee
She begins her journey with me
As I take a warm shower she prods me
Into the unknown corners of the galaxy.
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Gayatri Bollapragada
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Chinedu Dike 21 April 2018

Beautiful work of art, deeply detailed with good choice of words. Really a poignant introspection elegantly brought forth with artistic brilliance in beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Gaayatri.

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Thank you very much for the thoughtful feedback. Appreciate it!

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2018

Write comment. A great start with a beautiful poem, Gaayatri. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Thank you! Sure I will check out your poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 April 2018

Wow Gayatriji, such a soul-seeking poem, so deep, so intense, so passionate. I loved the art of poetry and the seeker within you. 10++++++++++ for this sharing. Subhas

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Thank you very much Subhas-ji for the kind and encouraging words!

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Thank you very much Subhas ji for the kind and encouraging words. Much appreciated!

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The Muse 20 April 2018

Well done Gaayatri! That is an intriguing poem.

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Thank you very much!

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