A New Days Breath Poem by Kevin Patrick II

A New Days Breath

Rating: 5.0

The stars surrender to the dawn
Winking out to the new born day
Then Robin's raise a sterling chorus
greeting the rays in morns parade

Now fresh light crawls the welkin verge
In blushing blues with stripes of pink
The river reflects an afterglow
Like a canvass melting wild inks


The town still drifts in soft repose
Serene in silence of a still life
Roads lay barren with wind that cries
And this world's free human strife

In that silence I find sublime
watching the day begin to breathe
Alone but feeling I'm complete
For one brief moment I feel free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 19 May 2026

Wow! .. Such awesome and amazing feelings written into this! .. Superb! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 19 May 2026

Ever so beautifully painted! .. Such precious beauty, such precious wonders! ..

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To my favorites! Brilliant verses.

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Wow! What a beautiful poem! A masterstroke. I concur with Richard wonderful comments! Superb, crystalline images that captivate the senses.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 May 2026

Incredibly beautiful vivid imagery! A wonderful tribute poem to Mother Nature and the feeling of freedom!

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