A New Star Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

A New Star

Rating: 5.0


A new star is born! !
A new love is seen,
A new life to the world!
A new heart is observed,
A new art is now noted,
A frivolous story of a star! !
With countless love.

Wednesday, October 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2020

Life! ! With countless love! ! ! A new star is born. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Denis Mair 14 October 2020

Indeed, new art may seem frivolous at first. When I see the materials a young artist works with, I think they are no more than froth. But wasn't the goddess Aphrodite born from froth? And aren't the smallest stars like froth on the Great Sky River? Time will prove their steadfast shining. A 5 for appreciating youthful creativity.

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