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A New Way To Fly

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Like birds on a high line
They line up at night time at the bar
They all once were lovebirds
Now bluebirds are all that they are
They landed in hell
The minute they fell from love's sky
And now they hope in the wine
That they'll find a new way to fly

A new way to fly
Far away from goodbye
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okeydokey #3 17 July 2008
Hmm...makes one think. I like this one. It is very neat the way it rolls off the tongue. The theme is also very recognizably significant. The first stanza is my favorite. Good stuff, little lady.
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Michael Koelliker 09 June 2008
very wonderful. i feel the rebirth of the body through spent time and money. very good. outstanding
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Michael Pruchnicki 12 May 2008
Well done! Some vivid imagery indeed - 'They line up at night time at the bar' 'Now bluebirds are all that they are' And for sure as you write- 'They'll leave it behind As soon as they find A new way to fly'
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Philip Caldwell 07 May 2008
awesome poem, good wording too
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