Wednesday, September 20, 2006

A Non-Starter And His Nook Comments

Rating: 5.0

His clock has stopped for some days
and he is not interested of time.
But the time is passing
and he is not worried.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 23 September 2006

This is a fine poem, with an unexpected ending which surprises. I also love your title and particularly the words 'the spineless characters won't stay any longer in his book and they run away'. You are a fine storyteller Nimal. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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David Tanguay 20 September 2006

Maybe he will be able to finish the book from the mental hospital. that's the best place to be, to write a book. I speak from experience

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Sandra Fowler 20 September 2006

A very stark picture, powerful and overwhelmingly sad. This poor man's world lies in ruins about him. Who can put it back together again? Fine work, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tranquil Ocean 20 September 2006

Nimal...well done.You've captured this very well taking the reader on a gentle ride with you. TO

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