A Pack Poem by Hans Raj Sharma

A Pack



Falling
Of winter
A lot better
But-
That's not all
About
The changing
Moods
Of the Nature
One can't even
Speculate truly
Affecting
The behaviour
Of every one.

With the onset
People facing
Winter blues
Feeling
Lazy and crazy
Craving
For rich food
And then-
For physical
Disorders
Seeking
Medical
Intervention
To tough out
The ailments
Sent for
And extravagantly
Spending over.

Whereas
A free service
Of the best
Six doctors-
Sunshine
Water and air
Exercise
Diet and rest
Can be availed
Anywhere
And no one
Can deny it
On the basis
Of nationality
Caste or colour
Creed or religion.
-Copyright © hrsharma ®2015
Ludhiana, Punjab, India.

Friday, February 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: free
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A free service
Of the best
Six doctors-
Sunshine
Water and air
Exercise
Diet and rest
Can be availed
Anywhere
And no one
Can deny it
On the basis
Of nationality
Caste or colour
Creed or religion.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 05 February 2016

A good message, well written.

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