beatriz hutton

A Part Of Me

I’ve let you see a part of me
that is very secret,
some piece of my soul
that not even my mother knows about.
It’s like
I’ve let you into the place
where the demons
lurk in the shadows.
I gave you
that key
to the chest
that contains all things
I wish I was
and you destroyed it.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 24, 2009

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  • Edward Parsley (11/5/2009 10:34:00 AM)

    very creative and imagitive.........
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  • Dierks Emerick (11/4/2009 9:31:00 AM)

    very nice, interesting, i think you may get a lot from reading this poem
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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 2:00:00 PM)

    Great poem..well penned... Thankyou for sharing
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  • Mark Wahlberg (10/28/2009 9:43:00 AM)

    Good work and god bless you.
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  • Henry Brown (10/25/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    The words are deep and whether from life or the imagination I feel with you 10

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/25/2009 1:18:00 PM)

    I gave you
    that key
    to the chest
    that contains all things................love flows by luscious glow, yet spumes of blue when floats over the hill top, evocatively ingenious by imagery,10/10, thanks for sharing

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