A Part Of Me Poem by beatriz hutton

A Part Of Me

Rating: 5.0


I’ve let you see a part of me
that is very secret,
some piece of my soul
that not even my mother knows about.
It’s like
I’ve let you into the place
where the demons
lurk in the shadows.
I gave you
that key
to the chest
that contains all things
I wish I was
and you destroyed it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 25 October 2009

I gave you that key to the chest that contains all things................love flows by luscious glow, yet spumes of blue when floats over the hill top, evocatively ingenious by imagery,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Edward Parsley 05 November 2009

very creative and imagitive......... 10

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Dierks Emerick 04 November 2009

very nice, interesting, i think you may get a lot from reading this poem 10

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

Great poem..well penned... Thankyou for sharing 10

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Mark Wahlberg 28 October 2009

Good work and god bless you. 10

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Henry Brown 25 October 2009

The words are deep and whether from life or the imagination I feel with you 10

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