lead me not to a path of righteousness, but, rather
lead me to guidance and understanding
bring forth a truth, so contageous and colorful
that only the young can define
for i am young at heart and receptive to all
for i am not righeous, but, rather
taught to guide and will inderstand
be not my leader nor my follower
just be my friend
Well structured, and despite its brevity, , full of wisdom
Rene: This poem is well structured and well written and yes I'll be your friend. We don't need any more leaders or followers we need friends. Please, if time permits read my poem 'A Friend' Thanks Lynn
'Be not my leader nor my follower / just be my friend. Words that carry much wisdom. There are to many self-proclaimed leaders and to many idolizing followers in this world.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good ending of a plea....10