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A Pebble

I thought it was snow
but it wasn't
it was just a pebble
gleaming in the late autumn's sun
about to set
on the roof of a shanty
on the nothern sea

Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
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Dipankar Sadhukhan 20 November 2016

A beautiful write deserving 10. You may like my poems 'Forgiveness' & 'Why I Write Poetry'.

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Hiroshi Satow 05 April 2017

Thanks, Diapankar. I'll read your poems!

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Kim Barney 20 November 2016

A Pebble is better than snow any day, at least for me. I do not like cold weather. Nice poem, by the way.

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Hiroshi Satow 05 April 2017

Thanks, Kim. Well, I'm not used to cold weather, either!

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