Saturday, October 14, 2017

A Person Is Thinking Comments

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A person is thinking, wasting his thoughts on bodies
And darkness, bad writing, and dying freedoms.
A prayer is cool, written tonight as we accept it always,
Safe like calling, safer than a shut door, being well.
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Naveed Akram
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James Mclain 14 October 2017

Looking through the eye's of one, It's night and day.. iip.. James

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

A person is eternal in his drugs of a sharp wonder, Drunk with despair, opened by the wounding, he strides Two steps after two steps, then that many steps paint him. Boiling and trapping, a waterfall feels emotional and created, Like a listening with fervour, with water that was water, Lovers stain their minds with burning lands of gold and water... ... loved these lines. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Naveed Akram

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