Elisa Lai

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A Petalfly - Poem by Elisa Lai

drifting down the noon beams
a golden petal
on reaching the cement
it came to life
and flew
away from me

Comments about A Petalfly by Elisa Lai

  • john tiong chunghoo (4/24/2006 11:34:00 AM)

    lovely, very japanese tanka (Report) Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (1/3/2006 10:17:00 AM)

    A lovely poem Elisa, I've never seen one but you describe it beautifully, and in such a delicate way. Super! Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, March 27, 2006

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