"A Pleasing Tree And Shadow In A Secluded Land"

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"A PLEASING TREE AND SHADOW IN A SECLUDED LAND"

A solitary shiny tree!
only a buddy his shadow,
living gleefully and free! !

A green grassy around!
Lighting by sunshine
seems as reflecting diamond! !

An irregular surfacelike a beautiful wave!
Created crest and trough,
An earthy heaven, place of rave! !

Its now more luscious!
By flowing breeze,
It cool and lustrous! !

Prodigious cloud in the sky!
Wishes their cordial salaam,
Alas! If I am there, I cry! !

Take me to that Eden!
Under that marvelous tree,
Out of all painful burden! !

I will see as mundane paradise!
Sit and Sleep for a while,
It wash all dismal febrility as curative ice! !

By Your Friend: Baquee Billah Ahmed

"A Pleasing Tree And Shadow In A Secluded Land"
Monday, September 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,grass ,lonely,nature,nature love,sunshine,tree
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today I have ed an Wallpaper for my laptop.That beautifully attracted me. I imagine myself in that place under that tree which attached here. And i compose this poem...
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 07 September 2018

A solitary shiny tree! only a buddy his shadow, living gleefully and free! ! A green grassy around! Lighting by sunshine seems as reflecting diamond! ! - - An amazing poem for your friend - - - - Each line reflects your love.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 07 September 2018

Thank U so much........ Thanks fr reading...I like to learn, , any sugeestion or comment always welcom

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 04 September 2018

Reminds WW. Loved reading and commenting. Keep it up

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 04 September 2018

Thank U brother.........................

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Naila Rais 03 September 2018

A nice imagination.......... I have used a bare tree in my story writing competition at my school...10 Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

thank U so much for ur best wishes to my siblings....

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Naila Rais 03 September 2018

Oh wow! ! Nice to hear.... My best wishes to them also...

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

So Nice.........I have got many prizes by poem comptetion from school life to colleg lif....my brother and sisters also sam poetic mind........

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