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" My Vision "

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I Feel about my vision!
How beautiful this earth,
For that my eye is only reason! !

How beautiful my body!
Cant be felt without eye,
whether handsome boy or attractive lady! !

My eyelid when open and close!
It help and protect my eye,

When a thing of unfavorable across! !
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" My Vision "
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,eye,feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today I was studying various disease and medicine of eye, Suddenly I remember the anatomy and physiology of eye...So i compose a poem on my vision
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 29 August 2018

So wonderful..... I really loved it..... Last para so determined, whether someone crazy or shy.... 10 Naila

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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2019

An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Toufeeq nadaf 08 March 2019

wow what a fantastic poem I really learn about eye ?????????????????????????????? VISION IS THE ART of SEEING WHAT IS INVIBLE TO OTHERS

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 08 March 2019

Thank you Mr. Toufeeq nadaf

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 October 2018

Verily, eyes are the greatest gift of God to man

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 24 October 2018

Thank you brother.......................

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2018

Thank God for my eye! I can feel the beauty of a rose or anything, Whether some one crazy or shy! ! .. beautiful my dear poet. your thinking, your studies and your vision to tell others about your vision..

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 27 September 2019

THANK YOU SIR...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 September 2018

A wonderful poem beautifully crafted. It captures one of the most important parts of our body. Mixing science with poetry enhanced the beauty of this write. Liked the final stanza. Great closure lines.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 12 September 2018

Thnk U so much... @Rose I like to learn more n more.. Always welcome any suggestions or comment...

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