" My Vision " Poem by BAQUEE BILLAH AHMED

" My Vision "

Rating: 5.0


I Feel about my vision!
How beautiful this earth,
For that my eye is only reason! !

How beautiful my body!
Cant be felt without eye,
whether handsome boy or attractive lady! !

My eyelid when open and close!
It help and protect my eye,
When a thing of unfavorable across! !

Cornea That transparent, spherical!
Help light to enter the eye,
then we can observe image or numerical! !

That iris with pupil in the middle!
determine how much light let into eye,
it always in work never be idle! !

Refract the light by eye lens on retina!
That transmit to brain by optic nerve,
Those common act whether India or Argentina! !

Thank God for my eye!
I can feel the beauty of a rose or anything,
Whether some one crazy or shy! !

BY YOUR FRIEND: BAQUEE BILLAH AHMED

" My Vision "
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,eye,feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today I was studying various disease and medicine of eye, Suddenly I remember the anatomy and physiology of eye...So i compose a poem on my vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 29 August 2018

So wonderful..... I really loved it..... Last para so determined, whether someone crazy or shy.... 10 Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

Thank U................................................................

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2021

Top score here

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2021

Part 3. In the famous poem, Kumarasambhavam, Kaalidasa devoted an entire shlokam to describe the beauty of Parvati's eyes. One should read it to experience the beauty of poetry. So marvellous.

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2021

But the poet has omitted to write about the aesthetics the eyes render to one's beauty and personality. A favourite adjective for women used by many Indian poets, especially tho those who wrote in Sanskrit is "Mrugnayanee", meaning doe-eyed.

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2021

So wonderfully written. A truly‘anatomical' poem.

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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2019

An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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