Saturday, March 18, 2006

A Poem In A Garbage Bin Comments

Rating: 5.0

A man dies, yes he is dying.
He lived like a dead man.
Nobody knew about his whereabouts.
My dear English professor,
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 27 March 2006

How powerful and profound, you have the poets gift for holding our attention.Love Duncan

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Nick Percowycz 19 March 2006

Ah, but you worried about him. Even the common man has an uncommon touch in someone's life. I love the line about the trauma he is living in after his death. Great touch. I think this poem deserves a 10, and should not wind up in the garbage bin. Excellent poem!

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Sandra Fowler 18 March 2006

The beauty of naked honesty, the gift of simplicity, the willingness to give oneself away in words, , , , This poem must have been painful to write. But the result is the work of a very fine wordsmith and a most uncommon man. Regards, Sandra

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