A Poem In Rebellion Poem by Jesse Ellsbury

A Poem In Rebellion

Rating: 4.0


Poem!
How dare you defy me
the words at my command.
I am your creator,
you cannot deny me
but somehow you do:

words gone AWOL,
escaped from my mouth,
I sent out the guards
but they came back with doubt
in a basket
like dirt from a harvest.

And this is the result,
a poem in rebellion
against the brain that spawned it,
all the words I tried to type
come out as if I yawned them,
too awake to sleep,
too tired to weep,
with just enough energy
to use the keys
to write a poem
that doesn’t deserve to
exist.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My response to a poem that couldn't follow the rules.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 29 August 2013

An excellent poem. This happens almost with every poet, but few can describe the ordeal so eloquently as you did. Well done!

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Heather Wilkins 31 July 2013

a great rebellion to a poem. sometimes our muse goes to sleep on us preventing the flow of words. but you did just fine,

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