A Poem Just For You.. Poem by Carin Van Der Merwe
A Poem Just For You..
Lost before the eyes of fate, i fall away and dessipate
To a simple thing i cannot see, the shaded faded love in me
The purest pain loves candles lost
Flame a verse for you I frost
For you and i never to part
I gave you the key to my heart
In words of whispers a love remembered
Yet by this mistake, those hearts dismembered
In song in tune, a single note
yet by this mistake a noose to throat
Once together was thought to be forever...sadly now its never
A fatefull mistake our hearts left to break
You left me to cry, My heart is asking why...
Silently i stare and sigh... i love you...
may God hold us together... i dont want to say goodbye forever..
You have a lovely rythm and way rhyme about your writing, yet it still gets the point of what you are trying to say in your writing. I enjoyed this...thank you for sharing.
A beautiful poem. First three stanzas are the best of this poem.....' the shaded faded love in me '.......Really good one, Carin. Keep on writing and sharing with us......10. Best Wishes Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Lovely lines within this poem...love makes one bloom when beauty on the inside radiates outwards but whether in love or out it drives the mad insane.... Cindy