Thursday, July 18, 2019

A Poet In Making Comments

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Check up your old childhood notebook,
Hides in it a child's wistful look,
The rookie has scribbled therein
Voices of heart from his within;
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 20 July 2019

So very true! Sometimes we do not identify our talent nor others spot it out! Due to lack of early identification and encouragement, many cannot flourish to full potential! Each one is gifted! Finding out what our special gift by ourselves or others can help us achieve greater heights! Unfortunately I identified my gift for poetry only after retirement!

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 July 2019

...after retirement... that makes us at least two, there must be more. I used to write heavy analytical stuff for Economic Times even after I left Times, but poetry and poetic translations of Sanskrit only after I retired. Thanks for the feedback.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 July 2019

EXSHOLIENT VISION O POET AP HOW true r ye we all overrule human being's wishes when they can't speak most of us cut the skin and make kids suffer in life effects of circumcision I am talking ALL POETS JUST listen

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 July 2019

Of course, PP, that is another area of shame of the time. Children should be looked at as happy and endearing investment for the future. If they do not grow happy, how can the future generation? Thanks indeed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 July 2019

A child has some inborn qualities. These qualities should be developed by the parents with enthusiasm. You have brilliantly inscribed this poem. Great work.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 July 2019

I really appreciate your feedback, dear poet KM.

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