Saturday, December 21, 2013

A Prayer That Be Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

When a prayer is plea packaged in veil,
And puja1, a covert plea for His pardon,
When a Bandagi2 begs for heaven’s bail,
And worship for a vaunted place in sun;
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2019

Yet, bless me Lord that my hopes breathe alive, I pray thee that in happy peace I rest—Loved these lines. A beautiful poem on prayer has been astutely delineated. Thank you Pathak sir. Full vote.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thank you once again for reading this old sonnet and liking it so much. My poem Joy Of Giving may have scored max feedback, but I feel there are better poems than that which have not received attention.

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