Candice Renae Williams

Rookie (Jan.10 1985 / Martin, Kentucky)

A Prisoner Of Doubt

Poem by Candice Renae Williams

A prisoner of doubt
is quick to the drain
being bound to his pout,
With a crippling chain.

No one may come,
and courage will not be
For no part of some
Could release him from he.

So watch through the fences
And hold in the cheer
Longing, taking over his senses
might intice him to peer.

Gaining strength he might-
Using the promise'd delight
Drag said chain-on hopeful mount
past rushes of whine-an offered respite;



(to be finished)


Comments about A Prisoner Of Doubt by Candice Renae Williams

  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/29/2005 9:25:00 PM)

    I like it a bit now. Keep working and fix the spellos. I will dropp in again soon.
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  • Candice Williams (3/28/2005 10:29:00 AM)

    Ahh Volia! I like this one even more... (more amusing-as you can tell that my criteria for poem liking is based on amusement)
    But I like'd reworking it... I was inspired^_^(Report)Reply

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  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/27/2005 2:22:00 AM)

    I am glad you like it. I don't, at all.
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  • Candice Williams (3/27/2005 1:30:00 AM)

    I like this one a lot. Hmm... perhaps the rhyming is a little off with the 'so tight ' part...(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 27, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, March 28, 2005