Brytanne Lee

Rookie (August 24,1990 / Erie, PA)

'A Razorblade Love' - Poem by Brytanne Lee

Death is all around us
Blades dance on our wrist
In sweet harmonial bliss
I love when you say those words
They taste so sweet
Like when you cut me deep
I died when you fell that night
After we had that fight
Fist flew into the air
The sad thing is neither one of us cared
I love you, can't you see?
Why can't you and I be?


Comments about 'A Razorblade Love' by Brytanne Lee

  • (12/21/2005 1:46:00 PM)


    Ja Ja its verys good!

    mit liebe Floy! *wink wink*
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  • (12/19/2005 9:12:00 AM)


    I love it! ! ! It has a lot of meaning. Keep it up! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2005 8:57:00 AM)


    a poem
    filled
    with loss
    and yearning
    yet strong truth
    keep up the good work
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 19, 2005



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