'A Razorblade Love' Poem by Brytanne Lee

'A Razorblade Love'

Rating: 5.0


Death is all around us
Blades dance on our wrist
In sweet harmonial bliss
I love when you say those words
They taste so sweet
Like when you cut me deep
I died when you fell that night
After we had that fight
Fist flew into the air
The sad thing is neither one of us cared
I love you, can't you see?
Why can't you and I be?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Floy Devlin 21 December 2005

Ja Ja its verys good! mit liebe Floy! *wink wink*

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Tofur Damico 19 December 2005

I love it! ! ! It has a lot of meaning. Keep it up! ! !

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Charles Chaim Wax 19 December 2005

a poem filled with loss and yearning yet strong truth keep up the good work

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