Brytanne Lee

Rookie (August 24,1990 / Erie, PA)

'A Razorblade Love'

Poem by Brytanne Lee

Death is all around us
Blades dance on our wrist
In sweet harmonial bliss
I love when you say those words
They taste so sweet
Like when you cut me deep
I died when you fell that night
After we had that fight
Fist flew into the air
The sad thing is neither one of us cared
I love you, can't you see?
Why can't you and I be?

Comments about 'A Razorblade Love' by Brytanne Lee

  • Floy Devlin (12/21/2005 1:46:00 PM)

    Ja Ja its verys good!

    mit liebe Floy! *wink wink*(Report)Reply

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  • Tofur Damico (12/19/2005 9:12:00 AM)

    I love it! ! ! It has a lot of meaning. Keep it up! ! !(Report)Reply

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  • Charles Chaim Wax (12/19/2005 8:57:00 AM)

    a poem
    with loss
    and yearning
    yet strong truth
    keep up the good work(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 19, 2005