A Real Despair Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Real Despair

Rating: 4.1


I shall call on you not out of despair
I will be there when it has gone beyond repair
It won’t look in niceites and fair
It is definitely blown over by air


I shall be on your side for all the times
It has been witnessed in recent times
You too stood for values and principles
I was always there as staunch disciples

The clouds were gathering storms
The relation was strained and not remaining warm
I could see great difficulty and danger
It should not have been spoiled with anger

The shadow looming large over our relation
There was going to be big mark in question
How could I thwart off the situation?
It still needed some solace or evaluation

I was not expecting to do a wonder
But still I had many questions to ponder
I had lot more to do the good to the friendship
It was to remain in tact as companionship

I could emotionally hide my feeling
It was inwardly pinching and killing
I had earnest try to keep it in tact
This was to be the centre core in fact

I would love to be on his side
The speculation was very wide
I had nothing to hold back or hide
There might have been some deviation slidr

I shall strive for nice spot
It may not be considered than big blot
We may blow some times cold or hot
The wordy dual is unnecssarily fought

I may still go for fair name
People may have no chance to blame
It will be nice and pefect bond
I always stood for it and was very much fond

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 07 September 2010

The shadow looming large over our relation There was going to be big mark in question How could I thwart off the situation? It still needed some solace or evaluation What a great though and string of words. I really thought this was an excellent poem. Kept me reading all the way through.

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Darshna Chopra 06 September 2010

I shall be on your side for all the times It has been witnessed in recent times

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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