poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Anywhere You Like

You suggested to me let us meet anywhere,

A place Where HE is not there,

We then will have enough freedom,

With close quarter and ruling the wisdom,



We exchanged so many pleasantries,

Life was to level with your words and commentaries,

No distance seemed between ocean and countries,

Neither mountains, hills nor any boundaries,



We had feelings for each other,

Relation still didn't grow any further,

Eyes met and said to one another,

Let us not forget this moment and bother


I prayed HIM sincerely for your hand,

He smiled and blessings lend,

I looked at you for further acceptance,

You okayed it without any insistence


Now I have enough courage and bold strength,

I could go and meet you at any length,

Is it not necessary to see each other before we marry?

Life' as challenge was to be understood and carry,

He was hesitant for slight moment,

I too did not allow him for single movement,

Slight delay was causing me some concern,

I was not prepared for sudden and any 'U' turn,



I offered my self for holy deal,

I was there for his wounds to heal,

With only condition for him to be real,

Waited for his approval for the final seal



What word was I expecting from his mouth?

I did not care whether he was from north or south,

I wanted firm commitment and promise,

Relation was to be permanent..................



I was not here for simple game,

He was not here for charge or fame,

it was an earnest attempt to do with sincerity,

What was at stake//////////? Nothing but simple clarity


I didn't know what all I did,

conscious very clear and didn't hide,

talks very clear and nothing to confide,

sincere desire with best offer to provide

I am not sure of what others might say
I want to have perfect guy in my way
He will come and grab me for ever
I want to rest on his solder forever


He must know what I am and what does it mean?
I can offer my complete conscience and lean
I want to know definitely and precisely learn
Will there be any treachery or any ugly turn?

He can be whole and sole for me
I may consider him as holy gift from thee
Since I know he is meant for my existence
I simply don’t worry for his continued absence

See to it that it is done with all good show
Allow me the freedom to mushroom and grow
I will stand all the taste of cruel wind
I stand there alone and you may find

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 30, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, March 25, 2010

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Comments about Anywhere You Like by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Suzon Albert (3/20/2019 10:51:00 AM)

    A sublime poem, nicely thought and written, I see a philosophical undertone as well 10++++
    I prayed HIM sincerely for your hand,

    He smiled and blessings lend,

    I looked at you for further acceptance,

    You okayed it without any insistence

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  • Johnmark O OkechukwuJohnmark O Okechukwu (7/24/2017 6:11:00 AM)

    Great piece birthed from a settled spirit...great content.10 for you

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  • Siddartha MontikSiddartha Montik (3/31/2017 7:47:00 AM)

    the thing we call Life..almost exposed in our mean sense.. yes Thought Provoking.. and to meet the meanings. Thanks for the lines and thought!

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  • Siddartha MontikSiddartha Montik (3/31/2017 7:30:00 AM)

    That Depth! ! immaculate..

    I offered my self for holy deal,
    I was there for his wounds to heal,

    I must Grow I feel in these lines! ! tahnks for sharing Poet! ! 10++! !

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (8/28/2016 5:53:00 PM)

    Thought provoking and eminent write. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Regards. +10

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  • Asis BiswasAsis Biswas (8/10/2016 1:28:00 AM)

    girl expressing her say very clearly and beautifully, what she want of him in life.Poet has arranged words and lines in a rhythmic way, IN A VERY SIMPLE WAY. CONTENT IS GOOD.

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  • Ovi OdieteOvi Odiete (1/27/2016 2:23:00 AM)

    Such a poignant and enthralling poem of yours....

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (1/16/2016 8:42:00 PM)

    Loaded with love that is both creative and compelling. well done my friend!

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/20/2015 4:41:00 AM)

    'It is done'! In the name of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (11/4/2015 4:57:00 PM)

    Desperation threaded with hope. Thank you for sharing.

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  • Malvikas Poet ChannelMalvikas Poet Channel (10/16/2015 10:48:00 AM)

    Words and imaginations are seem to be simply superb.

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  • Captain Herbert PoetryCaptain Herbert Poetry (6/29/2015 8:18:00 AM)

    A good quality kind of poem. GREAT

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  • Roseann Shawiak (1/11/2015 10:18:00 PM)

    A very sublime, meaningful and honest approach to finding and holding onto love in it's purest form. A fascinating poem, thank you for sharing it with us. RoseAnn

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  • Fragments Of Light And Love (10/22/2011 8:01:00 PM)

    extremely wonderful....you ind is wide as the filed of truth....nice one.....ten for this....

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  • Seema Chowdhury (3/26/2010 8:00:00 AM)

    lovely, nice and descriptive poem.
    there is a lot of depth and meanings in each line.
    thanks for sharing.
    take care

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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (3/16/2010 3:22:00 AM)

    I offered my self for holy deal,

    I was there for his wounds to heal,

    With only condition for him to be real,

    Waited for approval for the final seal

    lovely sensitive lines.....10+ thanks for sharing....

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  • Adnan Khalifeh (3/11/2010 7:06:00 AM)

    Nice one........I like most of it........Especially:
    We exchanged so many pleasantries,
    No distance seemed between ocean and countries,
    Neither mountains, hills nor any boundaries,
    Eyes met and said to one another,
    Was it not necessary before we marry?
    He was hesitant for slight moment,
    I offered my self for holy deal,
    I was there for his wounds to heal,
    With only condition for him to be real,
    Waited for approval for the final seal
    ...................
    Yours truly,
    Adnan

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (2/27/2010 11:26:00 PM)

    your words is like the open door that show a way to find love and friend..maybe u have a lot of experience yet share it with us...u always good..

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  • Rinki Nandy (1/25/2010 8:49:00 PM)

    i wish it was possible to find such respect and love in this world, if only.....but in that case i won't be a poet or a member of this site even. deprivation can shape or disfigure one's face and destiny.. nice write.

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  • Subbaraman N V (11/6/2009 12:22:00 AM)

    Last three lines when followed, world and life will be more pleasnt!

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