A Scapegoat's White Hope Comments

This is a charming piece Nimal, written in your inimitable engaging style. I love your 'sunstroke sunflower' and your 'scapegoat scamper' with his wheelbarrow of manure. The images are very unusual and appealing and the structure of the poem excellent. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

A lovely story poem, well done great creative touch Love duncan X

Wonderful observations, vividly portrayed. Nice work Nimal. Justine

Very surreal. The poet soldiers on in spite of all the difficulties. Helen Keller said, 'Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. It's what sunflowers do.' Take care, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

Nimal, a fine write like always... loved the diversity. Thanks, and hope all is well. :) xoxo Angie