'A Sensuous Symphony: Inhaling The Aroma Of Passion' Comments

One meaning of 'exude' is 'To discharge or emit (a liquid or gas, for example) gradually '

AND I think some readers will enlarge your PROVOCATIVE picture, to get a better look. Is yours a 'scratch and sniff' photo? Does it exude the odor of SWEAT when it is scratched?

I give FIVE stars, big ones! It is a Great Poem, ...as far as I'm concerned. Are you a & love doctor? ? ? bri : )

I OFTEN point out 'errors' or 'typos' [are those two words always or ever synonymous? ].....in PH poems. WHERE are YOURS? ?

(cont.) BUT watch out if the woman is wearing a big bumpy necklace and is ON TOP of you! Her necklace may leave an 'indelible mark' on BOTH OF YOU! ! ;) bri

I have 'no problem' with you, or anybody else willing and able, to entwine with big woman. It is not my preference for myself. I think I'd try a tiny titillating woman first.

(continued) Moon, as a slang word, may mean 'naked buttocks'. How rude! ! Ha ha.

'curves like tha moon'? Got anyone smaller....than the moon? Some people (sometimes being 'rude') may show their very curvy 'moon'! (cont.)

I like the title and how you reused 'symphony' in the poem. Sweat? If it was just sweat, dripping and running in rivulets over 'her', and nothing but sweat, and nothing but sweat, sweat, ...sweat, I'd probably abstain.....

3) it is the organised religions that relegate sexual coitus as just a tool for creation of progeny…

2) Kaalidasa has devoted a full chapter in Kumarasambhavam to the love-making of Shiva and Parvati. And Ritusamharam is an ode to sexuality in all the four seasons.

Indian civilisation and culture eulogise as the most divine experience. Almost all pagan civilisations do. The marvellous paintings if Khajuraho stand witness. So do our ancient literature like ‘kaamasastra'. Great poet of the yore Kaalidasa was inspired