'A Sensuous Symphony: Inhaling The Aroma Of Passion' Poem by Dr Aniruddha Babar

'A Sensuous Symphony: Inhaling The Aroma Of Passion'

Rating: 5.0


In the realm of sensuality, where desires ignite,
Lies the fragrance of sweat, an intoxicating delight.
A big beautiful woman, with curves like the moon,
Unleashes passion's fire, a sultry and seductive tune.

Her sweat, like an aphrodisiac, fills the air,
A heady scent that entices, beyond compare.
It mingles with passion, as bodies entwine,
Creating a symphony of pleasure divine.

Each droplet glistens upon her silky skin,
A testament to the passion that lies within.
With every embrace, the scent grows strong,
Arousing senses, a melody of longing.

In the heat of passion, bodies interlace,
Lost in the rhythm of desire's embrace.
The fragrance of sweat, a fragrant allure,
Guiding lovers through a journey pure.

In this sensual realm, where passion takes flight,
The fragrance of sweat ignites the night.
A big beautiful woman, an embodiment of grace,
Leaving an indelible mark, a memory to embrace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Indian civilisation and culture eulogise as the most divine experience. Almost all pagan civilisations do. The marvellous paintings if Khajuraho stand witness. So do our ancient literature like ‘kaamasastra'. Great poet of the yore Kaalidasa was inspired

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….eulogise sexuality and the sexual act as the most divine experience. …

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

I wonder what 'Unni' means by 'pagan civilizations'. Hm?

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2) Kaalidasa has devoted a full chapter in Kumarasambhavam to the love-making of Shiva and Parvati. And Ritusamharam is an ode to sexuality in all the four seasons.

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3) it is the organised religions that relegate sexual coitus as just a tool for creation of progeny…

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

One meaning of 'exude' is 'To discharge or emit (a liquid or gas, for example) gradually '

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

AND I think some readers will enlarge your PROVOCATIVE picture, to get a better look. Is yours a 'scratch and sniff' photo? Does it exude the odor of SWEAT when it is scratched?

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

I give FIVE stars, big ones! It is a Great Poem, ...as far as I'm concerned. Are you a & love doctor? ? ? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

I OFTEN point out 'errors' or 'typos' [are those two words always or ever synonymous? ].....in PH poems. WHERE are YOURS? ?

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

(cont.) BUT watch out if the woman is wearing a big bumpy necklace and is ON TOP of you! Her necklace may leave an 'indelible mark' on BOTH OF YOU! ! ;) bri

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