A Shout Of Friendship! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

A Shout Of Friendship!

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I know that you dont like read this
or because you dont want or you cant
but is here, for you
written in a white and in black sheet

i always thought that was friendship

and in this motion my ship was go on ahead

and i saw love and caress browsing in my sea
that is all i could see
because was true
at least for me

suddenly and sharply
the wind turn against my will
and i could see how fool i was

sailing before the wind


believing in a plural true
when you are so singular
without the comprehensiveness of the 'S'

i have no bounds when is about feeling
and i am true
that is the place i call the freedom

but you hurt me where has not a way back
and want put me to sail under false colors

No
I am plural
and i remains as a silly Captain
but still in the control of my ship

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 21 September 2013

It is more important to be in control of our destiny than to be subject to the destiny of others.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

I was so drawn into this piece it was hard to break away. Amazing!

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Heather Wilkins 27 September 2013

we need to control our dsriny and not let destiny control us. good write

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Heather Wilkins 27 September 2013

we need to control our dsriny and not let destiny control us. good write

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Sallam Yassin 21 September 2013

keep the sail sweetest Captain ahead sweetest is ahead and leave who not believe in S at a port where departure

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Stan Petrovich 21 September 2013

An 'S'? I hope you don't mean me...

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