A Silent Departure Poem by Naga Vamshidhar Ratakonda

A Silent Departure

Rating: 5.0


Only Silence Was Exchanged,
With No Words Spoken;

Only Feelings Were Exchanged,
With No Touches Made;

Only Heart Beats Were Exchanged,
With No Hugs Made;

Only Thirsty Lips Turned Red,
With No Kisses Made;

Only Their Eyes Have Met,
With No Signs Exchanged;

Only Thoughts Have Flown Ever-since,
With No Messages Communicated;

Only Humility Was Experienced,
With No Submissions Made;

Only Their Souls Became One,
With No Ashes Left To Trashes;

Only Departure Has United Them,
With No Greetings Of Separation;

Monday, April 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: ashes,separation,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 August 2019

Beautiful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Naga.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 April 2019

superb poem/// love it.............

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 April 2019

A well crafted wonderful poem, sir Naga....10+++++++++++

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Mohabeer Beeharry 23 April 2019

I like this write. It is original, and follows down to the main idea....departure

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Gajanan Mishra 23 April 2019

No greetings of separation, great write

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