A Softie Moves Smoothly Comments

This one is a portrait with many colours, but all muted. Again, the straightforward directness of your approach captures the reader's attention and touches his/her heart. How subtly you evoke the old man's death and the last line about the cat gives the poem an unexpected twist. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Rich atmosphere and fine imagery sustained in this shadowy little poem. Very touching, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

this was a soothing read, nimal. flowing work. -Tailor