Tuesday, May 17, 2011

A Summer Ordeal Comments

Rating: 5.0

These days the sun is excessively hot,
We can't see even the bright firmament with naked eyes,
The drops of perspiration shine on the body all the time,
Peace and comfort, the boons of winter,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Spiritual Seeker 20 July 2011

Coming from a very hot tropical country, and living several years in Europe and now in beautiful Belgaum India...where the climate is fantastic year round, even in summer..and.. ''Peace and comfort, the boons of winter''..I certainly can appreciate the scenes in your poem! .....I like it..rated it 10. Thanks for sharing!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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